You call the Dauphin an “Heir” but Princess Elizabeth Hanover is merely an “heir”.Julie Straker as a “Colleague” of Rita’s. You say that Patrick O’Neill is Rita’s supervisor? At what? Would “supervisor in the Unit” be better?.You later say that Angie Hagen is a childhood friend. ![]() In the profile of Kurt Douglas, would it be better to say that East Germany reunited with the West? The term reunified has different connotations to me (a 68-year-old American technologist with a PhD in CS).As I began to read Invisible Sun, I also copyedited it in my head-that’s one idea of fun-and I had a few small problems I was sure you’d want to know about right away.
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